T2 W3 Journal Writing: Improving the School

I like the aspects of the school field as i can play soccer.The aspect of the school i dont like is the music room as it is very noisy and the canteen.The school could improve them by their security as many things have been stolen.The other areas could be improve are the canteen as there are many birds flying around and shitting making the place very dirty they should make it air conditioned.Pupils could help by stop littering ,making noises and stealing things for fun.